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maymay
#1 Posted : 1/28/2010 10:54:04 PM

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Location: In the eternal NOW
Even Gods die...


It has been a while since I took my last breath,
For I have only taken one and never since then.

I wonder how it feels to see,to hear,to taste,to feel,
to hate,to love,to have some fear[...]

I am blind and mute and deaf and cold
I have made A wish and still it grows.


...for I am long dead
living on inside your head.




Hope you liked it...I couldn't sleep
Prison (by maymay)

The eyes are closed,
Darkness unfolds,
The heart is slow,
within something grows
Between the beats
Reality slips...

‘’-It’s only a dream,it’s only a dream!’’,
You wake up and scream.
You go back to sleep...
Everything’s still.

As the night dies with the break of the light
Your spirit comes back to the kingdom of time.


Note:maymay is a fictional character.All statements made by this character are a pure figment of his imagination.
 

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sunshineandsmiles
#2 Posted : 2/9/2010 12:37:02 PM

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TIME WILL TELL...
 
Spiced
#3 Posted : 2/9/2010 5:02:01 PM

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Great!
Pretty deep huh?

I think i even understand it.
 
maymay
#4 Posted : 2/9/2010 8:16:23 PM

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...it's called spartan writing.It's the most perfect description of the writers thoughts because it is written in an instant but in perfect harmony,it's the philosopher's stone of the human art...although you've stopped reading, your brain is in a loop of thoughts not noticing that it is over...it's like a bug in you brains software,read it again and pay attention to how you're reduced to the simplest way of thought...hence the term spartan writing...it can go even deeper with fewer words,that's even more interesting maybe next time
Prison (by maymay)

The eyes are closed,
Darkness unfolds,
The heart is slow,
within something grows
Between the beats
Reality slips...

‘’-It’s only a dream,it’s only a dream!’’,
You wake up and scream.
You go back to sleep...
Everything’s still.

As the night dies with the break of the light
Your spirit comes back to the kingdom of time.


Note:maymay is a fictional character.All statements made by this character are a pure figment of his imagination.
 
ambi-lysergance
#5 Posted : 2/9/2010 9:57:49 PM

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Location: Glasgow, Scotland
love your work maymayWink
ambi lysergance is a fictional character who in the realms of fantasy indulges in such topics as science, arts and psychoactive plant induced visions
 
 
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